Rabu, 30 Maret 2011

comparison-contrast procedure

Name : Sari
NIM : 1209503156
Class : BSI / E / IV

Two Ways of Washing Clothes

Of these two ways of washing clothes, either by myself with my hand or at laundry with machine.
When I washing clothes with my hand, I can washing my clothes efficiently and more economize and can believe that my clothes cleaner than when I washing my clothes at laundry with machines. My clothes also can I give some softener for when I finished washing my clothes before I dry it. Why I choose washing clothes by myself because beside it I can economize my money and washing by hand also can exercise muscles for not strained and cramps although washing clothes by my hand makes me so tired by I that never mind because tired can lost easily.
On other hand, washing with machines at laundry makes me wasteful of my money and I can’t believe that my clothes is clean and smell by softener as usually I give that to my clothes. And sometimes washing at laundry dissatisfied for the result and it’s too long when I need my clothes soon and my clothes still there so I feel bored and dissatisfied when I washing my clothes at laundry with machines.
The reason I like washing my clothes with my hand is because economize of electric and money for involve the global warming and wasteful of money. I can save my money in the bank for buy something that more useful like needed of thing daily or give my money to my parents.

1 komentar:

  1. yashinta..
    sari.. i want to give comments
    the topic is contrast.
    i found this sentence "washing with machines at laundry makes me wasteful of my money" i think it can be change with this sentence " washing with machine in laundry waste my money."

    i think some sentences in this essay is too long...

    thanks^_^

    BalasHapus