My Father is the real “Hero”
I’m so proud have a father like him !!
My father is not a weak man. Nearly half a century, was married to my mother, she understands how the characters in the context of the establishment of living world. Nothing is certain, it also does not mean that the world is not hopeless. My father spends a few decades to understand that wealth, and big name is not a guarantee that the powerful that some one with abundant spray of material. Not at all. Rich-wealthy person will not be taken off property. Then we as a very small creature in front of the Lord must always be grateful and remain subject to GOD. That was part of a lot of advice that he always say and remind their children.
EXPRESSIONS OF DAD ALWAYS SAY to her children, we not be afraid do not have friends if we have faith that we are already doing good things and not trouble others. And always think that giving concern should not end with a concern. Giving something does not have to expect given something. Has relationships with many people is a fortune. My father expects his children to be a polite person warm and open. Because life is a space for sharing, exchanging matter, and spread love. So much to give educated father to his children compassion, responsibility, be courteous to all men and fathers to direct their children to get together to understand the difficult situation and give you the best.
You are the real hero, dad..
Hello teh Opy,
BalasHapusWhen I read your article, I remember my father directly too.
The idea is good, but when converted into writing, there is still much thing that have to correct especially in each sentence. Then the title also has to change in phrase, may be you can change to "My Father, My Real Hero!"
And, overall, there are not two things that compared in contrast.
yusanthiya : hi ...
BalasHapusi just want to give some comments for u. first, i think sofi can revise using subject and verb or 'to be' in every sentences and how the relation of subject and verb in sentence.
what i mean to revise using verb or to be is, i will quote one, 'many people is a fortune'. i think 'is' for singular , and word of 'people' is plural, so 'is' can be changed to be 'are'.
besides that, my opinion about the text, i think its text describes about sofi's father and a lot of things which relate with him. i did not find something which is contrast in the text. my advise, if sofi wants to make it contrastingly, perhaps sofi can make comparison about the affection of sofi's father and the affection which is given by someone who is also a father but he is not sofi's father. it will be contrast, because sofi's father and someone else who is also a father have same status, that is as a father.
i hope my comment is useful for u ...