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BEING POSITIVE THINKING
Nowadays people are working very hard to live their life and the welfare of state. It informs that only those are creative and enthusiastic upon their works will be appreciated automatically by the success. And so are the people unmentioned by above capability surely would not get the chance to accept the best resluts like the capable one. This kind of people will fill their life with many small things; too afraid to see the future and “force” to be happy with the poor situation. Besides, they became pessimistic in every things going around as the result of “negative” habit they maintained. There is the significance loss of the soul that they do not believe the winning potential in theirself. It seriously neeed the focus rehabilitation to set back this kind of people to survive well by maximalzing their potential; positive thinking.
Why is it important?
Let’s check around about this. habit is the representation of the continually of same activities. A person will automatically do the things without reasoning how to do after million times how the things done. If the person used to be in positive, thinking and doing habit, it will affect on to the positive sides of his/her life. On the contrary of it, negative habit will break up all the expectation and sources of happiness.
According to Dr. Abraham el-Fiky, habit is built by the way of how one is thinking. There are only two kinds of ways of it; positive and negative. Both are giving the big impact to those are “familiar” with it. In short, only those are thinking positive who will have the opportunity for the success and happiness.
By thinking positive it will make the person feeling happy. The bank data on the brain always ready for giving the data to the owner of the brain according to what kind of data he/she wanted. If the person asks the positive it will serve it as soon for him that caused to be brave, optimistic and happy. There is not excuse why one could be so desperate and look like has no sense of life except the less art of thinking he/she take.
There was a story that once think negative everyday. He interpreted all the data came to his mind negatively, he never took the positive side of everythink that finally make him has not enthusiastic, desperate and thinking small. that’s what he got as if there is no hope for expressing what he wanted to be that he once found a mentor ordered him to think positive then finally he could feel the happiness. So the positive thinking lead one to the habit of the happiness.
Anonther reason why we have to be positive and happy cause there is a cause that forbid us from being shut and weak. The art of the life and its beauty has not yet been whole explored even by the masterpieces. In another hand life is a bounty from God that must be thank by living well and benefiteous to the other. More over we will not feel the happiness and the chance everyday to really enjoy the life and take the advantage of each what happening except by thinking positive. Then what we have to do right now is to take the decision and big intended to change the quality of life. This is the point willy-nilly to take.
All the best players, actors, hollywood actresses, the rich bussinessmen, and the other great men are not getting all their achievements taken from granted. They did really working hard to gain their dream. They can got the happiness such now after having the worse path of their life. They had to wke up early after being failed from the bussiness they had. They must not be desperate, they must be really a warrior for their self. We know them as the people that only could enjoy the life but actually we do not know how many thousands of the fail they got before becoming a winner. They had to face the crush of the life, life indeed is crazy and hard if we are not hard too then we will be weaken by the life itself. And the point is to be hard to be ready for the life we could not at all except we can think big and neveer desperate. This kind of characteristic will only owed by the people who always think big and always trying to maximilize their potention. Thhinking positive is the first beginning and as the starting point to experience the life. Then we can conclude by ourself that it is the condition to gain the success.
Let’s check around to the people that has already practiced it and feeling how beaautiful the life is. There is no even one person does not know who Mahatma gandhi is. He is the law man that was too afraid to face even talk with the people. Once he taught that he will not be changed if his life was just so so and since of that he began to think, thinking big, to against the government of England in his country, India. He could face the Harshment of England colonial by his princip. He could be so hard because of thinking big and positive.
In the other aspects, all must be know who is the owner of “the apprentice” reality show held by Donald Trump. He is the amongst ten the richest man in the world. He has many big companies that give him million dollars in a month. He is expert in real estate that he is the most famous among all. Of course the dedication to his works could not be mentioned again. Donald is really a great man, he could face all the trouble well eventhough how hard the life hit him. Once the big resession in e extraordinr on his real estate bussiness hit him. He owed billion dollars to more than one thousands banks. He had to pay it all meanwhile he had not enough money. The Bodyguard often came and threaten him to pay as soon but he still stick and finally faced all those by positive and big thinking that after the resession he got more millions from his bussiiness.
Bill zanker is another person that deserved to give two thumbs. How come the small company that has only a few employee could be the big company with many thousands employee in a little year. Learning annex is his company. It is a bussiness running on teaching the people with the extra ordinary people. The first time he could only rent the ordinary teacher to teaching in his company that made also only ordinary income. But something big happen. He changed the way of his thinking. By thinking big and positive he changed all those. He began to have the unordinary income any more even two hundred percents increased as before. He will not be such like now of he did not find the bst formula to make it real. So it is the chance for us to be like him (if we will).
The difficulties
To make the change of course rquired an effort. To make the big change then really required the big effort too. It is no matter for those are accustomed with working hard, but rather difficult for those are usually spend their time for sake of enjoyment. To be usually with thinking big and positive we have to make it usual in our daily lifes. According to some facts that some of the persons who were trying found it rather difficult to change cause it against their habitual action. Of course it is. But if we realize how big the the advantage we will get if he had already been thinking positive then we will never bored to always think such so.
Another advantage that should be rememberred in to our brain that thinking positive build he self confidence to ourself. By thinking positive it will order the mind to always think the good that make us optimistic to see what is a head. The trouble is no more as something difficult to break up cause we will make it as the stunt to be the better person who can break up the problems bigger and bigger again.
In shortword, in this time, the era where we forced to be a professional for survive required a spirit to always motivated us to do the best thing ever. There is no person who always struggle along his life, there must be one moment that for a while feeling the depression. But the good man is who can be back to the perfect condition getting ready for the stunts a head. That’s the typical of the person that always think positive and learning from the mistake to get the bigger success.