Rabu, 06 April 2011

cause-effect essay_sri mahasiswi immawati^^

Painting is my life

Painting is something special that always fill my day,my time and my world. I do love painting, i can not separate between painting with  my life. Painting always gives  the new  dimension on my mind. This routine makes me could represent everything that comes to my brain to  be something real  that could be seen by others . It’s great,right??
However  painting  is my hobby, it’s something special that couldn’t  I leave in my life,cause with painting i could find myself, i could draw a dream that comes to my mind like what I think about a white horse prince. Automatically I could represent him into the real world through an image. I always think that it create the exceptional  feeling . Instead painting could repair my mind, especially when I’m sad, I always draw a picture so that I feel fair to middling ,It restrain my mind to be cool to get over all of my problems.
                Realize or not, I’m used to express my feeling to be a picture . That’s the way to enjoying myself , I often draw what I love and what I want in my life. It emerge the different color of the world. I love painting so much, I don’t know what happen to my life if there’s somebody that ban me to draw. In that case may be i will lost my spirit to face the day, due to as long as I life, I always feel alone and lonely, but with painting I could lost my boring time like that.
                Overall  I life with painting, I have done everything with painting cause actually there’s no space between my painting and I. It closely  related to each  other, I love painting and I find my world throught the realization of my imaginary that comes to my mind, I find my world.
               

Selasa, 05 April 2011

Cause_Effect Siska Hardiana Safitri


My Loving of Nature
When I say the word nature, in a glance, my mind directly think to mountains, hills, and seas. But, what is the nature itself? Nature in dictionary is all the plants, animals, and things that exist in the universe and are not made by people or it happened naturally. It means that nature is absolutely created by God. Nature is not only earth but also all of the planets which appear in universe. The stars and the moon are including the miracle of nature that are God created.
Nature is a wonderful thing and it is incomparable. It is so beautiful until I can’t describe it whole by words. My mouth is stuck when feeling about nature. I just can feel how great this nature with its created. Nature can give the human senses room enough, even more than enough. I can go out daily and nightly to feed my eyes by staring at the stars and the moon. The glittering of the stars makes the great nature perfect. No doubtful in my feeling that nature is the beauty one in the universe.
After feeling the beauty of nature, I will feel the different feeling that I have never known before. Nature gives me the spirit to face this hard life for better future. It gives me the confidence to act wisely. When I feeling down and feeling give up, I just go to somewhere which back to nature such as hill to flare up all the problems and try to get the chemistry with nature. Then, I will feel more calm and my spirit step by step rising.
Beside it, nature is the inspiration source for me. When I feel fed up and feeling my thought as if frozen, it can make my mood become bad. Not only that, it also make my thought hard to think positively and clearly. But, nature can give back my thought clearly and I can focus anymore to think something.
Nature provides a lot of places which my body can feel relaxing. When I go to mountain or hill, I can feel the fresh air till it stick to my backbone. After my thought my body feels fresh, I can do something joyful. When I am getting stress and depress, I like to go to some place which nature sense to refresh it. When I go to the beach, I can feel so free as if the wave also feels what I am feeling. I can see the wonderful sunrise and sunset at the edge of the beach. It really makes me relax and feel like in paradise.
Responsibility is one of the characteristics which must have in every people. Nature accustoms me to build that characteristics and discipline. When I plant something, I should take care and water it everyday until it grow well. Beside it, when I go to somewhere such as mountain or nature protecting place, I don’t allow to break the plants. For me, it is one of the ways how nature builds the responsibility of my self.
I get my necessary in nature and of course it through the process first. All of the materials which needing is provided in nature. For example, to build a house needs some materials in nature. The furniture to complete the house itself is back to nature. Treating our body with healthy food such as vegetables and meats are also back to nature. Papers which I always use to write something is also back to nature. So, how narrow-minded I am when I say that nature is not everything. But, the fact says the truth that nature supplies all of my necessary.
When I have already felt the great of nature, directly or indirectly it makes me closer with my God. The creator of this universe. How great God make it perfectly. The praises praise to God when facing the beauty of nature. Just close my eyes, feel this glory work, and I will feel closer with my God.
Nature is the incarnation of our thought. I always try to keep my thought always positively to explore this nature. Absolutely right, when I explore it wisely, nature will friendly with me.

Jumat, 01 April 2011

Yeni Elmi_Comparison Contrast

English in variety learning context.


ESL (English as a second language), ESOL (English for speakers of other languages), and EFL (English as a foreign language) all refer to the use or study of English by speakers with a different native language. The precise usage, including the different use of the terms ESL and ESOL in different countries, is described below. These terms are most commonly used in relation to teaching and learning English, but they may also be used in relation to demographic information.
ELT (English language teaching) is a widely-used teacher-centered term, as in the English language teaching divisions of large publishing houses, ELT training, etc. The abbreviations TESL (teaching English as a second language), TESOL(teaching English to speakers of other languages) and TEFL (teaching English as a foreign language) are also used.
Other terms used in this field include EAL (English as an additional language), EIL (English as an international language),ELF (English as a lingua franca), ESP (English for special purposes, or English for specific purposes), EAP (English for academic purposes). Some terms that refer to those who are learning English are ELL (English language learner), LEP(limited English proficiency) and CLD (culturally and linguistically diverse). So many terms in learning English context. 

ReV_Essay Yeni Elmi

Smoking cigarette continuously has much impact
   Smoking cigarette continually can make the people feel some ill like cancer and coronary heart. As we know cancer is the most dangerous disease and Cancer is a class of diseases characterized by out of control cell growth. And one of the causes of cancer is smoking cigarette too long. Then heart disease is the leading cause of death in the world, and the leading cause of death among smokers.
    If we look at the fact, smoking cigarette has killed so many people in the world. Indonesia occupied in third position as one of the countries which people die because of smoking after India and China. Based on survey results of the Association of Public Health of Indonesia in 2007, as many as 1127 people die every day because of smoking. Of the total deaths, approximately 67 percent were male. And America occupied in fifth position as country which has lot of smokers after Rusia. As many as 443.000 people die every year because of smoking.
    In a day, how many packs of cigarettes sold out in the world and every second how many people die because of smoking. Everything was very ironic. There are no steps taken to reduce the number of smokers in the world. And the worse is there is no specific rule that prohibits children under age not to smoke. Because today, smoker also consist of children.
    I don't know yet, why do the people like smoking. As we know, smoking cigarette has so much impact but the people still smoke again and again. Maybe the government can take steps to reduce the number of smokers in the world. If we don't take that step, the number of death will be increase every time.

sofia_revisi essay 1

Cigarette is bad
Cigarette is a cylinder of paper according to a length of between 70 to 120mm with a diameter of 10mm, containing tobacco leaves that have been enumerated. Cigarettes were burned at one end allowed to simmer for the smoke to be inhaled through the mouth at the other end.
Dangers of smoking every cigarette sis lit will spend over 4000 toxic chemical that harm and may bring death. With every puff that resembles a suction death, when toxic smoke had entered the human body, will bring damage to every organ in its path, starting from the nose, mouth, throat, respiratory tract, lungs, blood vessels, heart, reproductive organs so that the urinary tract and bladder when party of the toxins were removed from the body in the form of water semi. Nicotine, such as unlearns medicine heroin, amphetamines and became the main cause addiction, nicotine also become the main peat of the rest of heart disease and stroke. Nearly one quarter of heart disease patients is due to smoking habits.
Impact of smoking on non smokers (passive smoking) has long been known. But the dangers of parental smoking on children’s health just now surfaced research conducted by Dr. Paolo vines in some European countries known that children have the biggest impact.
Which is about three times the lung cancer and respiratory problems associated with smokers other than parents. The risk of children affected by lung cancer has increased to 3,6 times that of smokers because parent of children have become a passive these smoker.

sofia_comparison- contrast

My Father is the real “Hero”
I’m so proud have a father like him !!
My father is not a weak man. Nearly half a century, was married to my mother, she understands how the characters in the context of the establishment of living world. Nothing is certain, it also does not mean that the world is not hopeless. My father spends a few decades to understand that wealth, and big name is not a guarantee that the powerful that some one with abundant spray of material. Not at all. Rich-wealthy person will not be taken off property. Then we as a very small creature in front of the Lord must always be grateful and remain subject to GOD. That was part of a lot of advice that he always say and remind their children.
EXPRESSIONS OF DAD ALWAYS SAY to her children, we not be afraid do not have friends if we have faith that we are already doing good things and not trouble others. And always think that giving concern should not end with a concern. Giving something does not have to expect given something. Has relationships with many people is a fortune. My father expects his children to be a polite person warm and open. Because life is a space for sharing, exchanging matter, and spread love. So much to give educated father to his children compassion, responsibility, be courteous to all men and fathers to direct their children to get together to understand the difficult situation and give you the best.
You are the real hero, dad..

Rev Essay 1_Santy

Village is still becomes favorites

Who says that living in a village does not make people happy? Some people think that living in villages will not make people's life increases in economic. But it is not entirely correct. It is proven that there are still people who prefer living in villages to living in big cities. They have jobs that can adequate their life. Moreover they feel more comfortable, safe, and peaceful. There are the reasons why a village are still becomes favorite.

The first thing that you should know is the atmospheres in villages are more pleasant than in cities. We can feel it from the air. The air is fresher and make healthy. That is something which is different between both of those. As we know, nowadays the air in the city has been mixed with pollution. But in villages are not too have much pollution. It is because there are still so many trees which can filter the air from pollution and make it fresh.

Beside it, the natural’s beauty in villages always linked to the conditions which are still green and lush. Why? It is because there are still so many forests, fields, and rivers where the water is still clear. Those make villages so natural and more beautiful. If we compare it with the conditions in big cities, it will be very different. Though, cities are also beautiful with so many buildings with great architecture inside. But village is more beautiful with its natural which is still original from God.

Furthermore, something that makes villages more comfort is its situation. Almost of people absolutely want to live in safe situation without criminal offense happen. As we know, number of criminal offense in villages is lower than in big cities. That is why villages are still exist become the place which safe and comfortable to live.

And second reasons why villages is still becomes favorite is the condition of the society. Social interactions between rural societies are friendlier. It is proven with their act to one another. Almost of them have good attitude and use friendly and gentle language to interact each other. The example is they always greet people whom they meet while in fact they do not really know that man. That’s the sign that they always respect the others.
In the other side, helping each other is a major advantage from rural societies. They undoubtedly will help each other wherever they are. They help neighbors who need assistance. Actually that is makes them closer each other. The sense of togetherness among them is still high. And it is very different with urban societies who are so individualist.

The last reasons are about the living cost. Living cost in villages is cheaper than in big cities absolutely. It can be compared with three points. First is from educational fees. In most of village the educational fee are cheaper than in big cities. Although it is cheaper, but the quality and competitiveness of schools still can be competed.

Then, it is also become the difference between them. If we live in a village, we shall not to worried or confuse with monthly fee that so high such as in a city. For example, there are no costs incurred to pay a monthly trash, because it can be burn directly. They also do not have to subscribe the water to the Water Company every month. It’s because ground water in villages are still clean and clear.

For the last, there is one thing that makes living in villages more profitable. That is we should not to worry if we want cooking something. The prices of vegetables and fruits are cheaper. If we go shopping in market, even though with limited money we still can get what we need. It is because almost the vegetables or fruits are directly from their own crops. Not only cheap, the vegetables and fruits are also fresher and free of pesticides.

However living in villages is different with living in big cities. Now, it is depend on us prefer to live where. The texts that described above revealed that villages still have many advantages to live by us.