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The Best Thing for Children
Many of us know that parent always give their affection to their children. Parents have something that always makes the children feel comfort with them. Actually parents can be a friend for their children. Because, parents have experience in their life that can make their children know about this life. And they want to give the best thing for their children. They want to give the best in many aspects. The best thing in their religion, education, attitude, decency, and other things. They really know what the best thing for their children.

Generally we know that parents always give their affection to their children. Until the family as we know it ceases to exist, nobody will dare to analyze parental affection as distinguished from that general human sympathy which has secured to many an orphan fonder care in a stranger's house than it would have received from its actual parents. Usually parents know what their children want, but children don’t know what their parents want. As we know that parents will give anything for their children. Children are valuable thing for them. Parents will not give bad thing for their children’s life.
The second reason, children can feel comfort with their parents, but sometimes they didn’t comfort with them. Parents know what way to make the children comfort with them. Children need to share their problem to another person. And parent is the best place for share the problem. Parents have good solution for the children problem. An inhibited teenager may wish to cover up their pain with solitary distraction while the uninhibited one may seek the continuing company of familiar peers who knew the victim. Although they may seem extreme at times, most reactions will fall within normal limits. Besides that parents understand what their children feel. As a parent, they always think what their children feel. They can feel what their children feel. If they are sad, happy, etc. And parents know it.
The third reason, parents have desire for their children. Every parent wants to see their children success in the future. So, they give the best thing for their children’s life. For example some private schools do an excellent job of meeting the needs of gifted children, while others don't. Many public schools do not do a good job of meeting the needs of gifted children, but others do an excellent job. However, individual teachers also matter a great deal. An excellent school may have a teacher who does not work well with gifted children.
Another thing is give the best thing in their religion. A great piece of advice for teaching religion to your children is not to use it as a form of mind control-through ideas of divine punishment and retribution. Inflicting a fear factor to their kids over religion is certainly not the way to go. God should be reflected as a loving, tolerant and forgiving supreme being. Teaching children that God is loving also teaches them tolerance and respect for all. As the parent consistently use whatever scripture, ascribe to as a tool of fear and control their kids are going to grow up with resentment towards them and religion. Whether there is a God or not should not be the issue. It is how the idea of God and religion is presented to their children by them.
So, parents can make everything is good for their child. They know what they will do and what will they need. Become a parent is not easy but we will feel satisfied show our children success in the future.

Comparison Contrast Descriptive_Siska Hardiana Safitri

On weekend or in holiday, some people usually spend their time with family. When considering going on vacation and having fun with family, I prefer going to Cibodas Botanical Garden than Dunia Fantasi.
Cibodas Botanical Garden is located in Cipanas-Puncak-Cianjur. It is in Mount Gede-Pangrango area. Because of that, the weather is so cool and the temperature is approximately 17⁰ C. Cibodas Botanical Garden is the side-branch of Bogor Botanical Garden. There are many facilities available to complete your holiday. Glass House, Moss Park, Waterfall, Sakura Park and absolutely wide park which can use playing with family, relaxing and refreshing our mind. The air is so fresh and there is no pollution which can disturb our fun. The most important thing, we can enjoy our weekend without worry about safety of our family especially for children.
On the other hand, Dunia Fantasi is also available a lot of plays or entertainment such as Kora-kora, Halilintar, Tornado, Kicir-kicir, Hysteria and many others. But, those plays are so dangerous for people whom have problem with their heart or for old man and also forbidden for children who’s not enough yet in limited minimum of some plays. We will not feel comfort and fresh there. We will feel tired after playing all those plays.
Family is everything for us. The safety and pleasant of our family is important. When our mind feels fresh, we can feel relaxing and enjoying with them.

Yusanthiya_Essay (rev 1)

Why do Parents Know What Is The Best for Their Chidren ?


Do you know that parents always know what is the best for their children ? Actually, we know that every parents have the natural affection for their children. So, they will know and feel what is the best for their children. Besides that, they have strong intuition to them. And then, its intuition which makes parents know about the best thing for their children. Another reasons can be said because of their pure love and pure love which makes parents feel that children are important for their life. When they think that children are important, so it makes them thinking carefully and believe their intuition. Another thing is parents have experience in their life. That is why parents always know the best thing for their children.
Generally, a lot of reasons can prove that parents will know what is the best for their children. First reason is parents have the natural affection for their children. Their affection is something special which is shown just for their children, and it also makes parents to know how the way to take care them with love. Parents take care their children, since they were born. It will be natural because every parents have the affection to the children, although sometimes not all parents have the affection to them. Especially for a mother, when an infant is born, she will take care her infant with love, it can be shown when a mother gives her infant milk breast. It is proof of affection of parents to children. Besides that, when parents have children, they will take care them carefully. They will not leave them to grow up badly. How they can take care their children, it can be shown when parents never forget to give the rule for them, to discipline. Parents will educate them to know their God, to live in society, and to be a good person for everyone. Every parents do not want if their children grow up to be bad person, and because they have natural affection which it makes parents knowing the way to take care their children. Due to the fact that parents have the natural affection, they also will always help their children everytime if they can do it. Parents will try to do everything only for their children. They do not care if it is things which are bad or difficult to do. For example, when a child needs something like toys, parents will look for it and buy it just for their child or when a son/daughter cannot do his/her assignment, parents will help him/her to finish it.
Second reason is parents have strong intuition. Parents can know what is the best for their children by their intuition, because they believe that their intuition can make their children’s life better. Sometimes, parents’ intuitions are real, when parents’ intuition have effect for children’s life. It also can avoid them of bad things. It is natural, because every parents will use their feeling or intuition to feel what is the best for their children, and it will be real in some condition. How their intuition can have effect to children’s life is parents will believe their intuition to feel what is the best for them. One example of it, when parents have intuition, it will be done with affection also. They will think that what they think and feel will be right for them, without they care how children think about that, it is like an actress (Arumi). She went out from her house because she thinks that her parents is over protective to her. She does not feel comfort, but in any case, parents think that they are right. It has happened because Arumi loves someone, but her parents does not agree with her love. Parents think that Arumi’s soulmate is not good boy, so, parents ban Arumi to have relation with him. Arumi’s parents only want she leaves him and lives better without him. Arumi does not want to do it, so she went out from her house just because she wants to show that she does not agree with them. What has happened with Arumi, it shows that parents have intuition to ascertain what is the best for their children, although their children think different. It can be right or wrong. It depends on condition.
Third reason is parents think that their children are important for their life. This is one reason which is very natural of people. When people have been parents and they had children, then they will think that the children is everything for them. Someone who can live to continue the generation of family is children. So they will think that children are their future, and they are also their life.
Last reason is parents have experience in their life. It can help parents to educate their children carefully, because they had passed a lot of experience which was bad and good. When they were young like their children, of course, they also experienced a lot of moments to get many things. It can be good or bad things. But in different condition, when they have been parents, their experience will become thing which can be used as standard how they ascertain good or bad for something. For instance, when parents had ever been young and they were growing up to be adult, it is certain that they experienced many moments and got many things because of that. One example, that is, when parents had experienced that smoking was not good for health but they did it at that time, and they have got impact of that, so, they will tell to the children that smoking is dangerous for health and they will not leave their children smoking or be a smoker. It is ascertained from the experience. So parents’ experience will be something which is important to learn how to choose good things without doing mistakes.
Many reasons can explain that parents know what is the best for their children. There is because parents have the natural affection, they have strong intuition, they think that children are important and one important reason, it is because they have experience in their life. Its all can be reasons which can prove why parents know what is the best for their children.

Yusanthiya_(Contrast-Descriptive)

Difference of Men and Women’s Brain

God creates human in the world, they are men and women. Men and women are human, but I think, they have difference. What is different of them is their brain.

The brain of men and women is different. Basically, there are some differences of men and women’s brain, that is, spatial difference, verbal difference, and difference of memory. First, about spatial difference, men’s brain has inclination developing and having spatial which is more complex, it is like mechanical scheme, or like ascertainment of abstract direction. Second, verbal difference, part of cortex of men’s brain is more used to do spatial functions, it will cause inclination to give little portion to part of cortex producing and using the words. So, men usually use 7000 words in day. Third, when talking about the difference of memory, it will talk about how men can memorize something or remember about something. Because hippocampus (central memory) of men is smaller, it will make men cannot remember detailed all things. Generally, men’s brain is systematic, they have high ability to combine everything, to control emotion, to have high orientation in working, they act something at first then they will think for that. They also have response which is aggressive to the risk, and they have inclination to compete with another men. If we look from the way of men gives information when they talk to everyone, they will talk directly and use literal words. In condition, men’s conversation also have inclination to the facts.

On the other hand, women is more different than men, from some difference, first, women’s brain is less to develop, it causes their spatial is not complex, and it impact on their thinking, they are usually difficult to do mechanical scheme, or like ascertainment of abstract direction. Second, if it is looked from verbal difference, women’s brain can balance using spatial functions and give same portion of part of cortex to produce and use the words. So, women can use 20.000 words in day. Third, the difference of memory, hippocampus of women is bigger than men, it causes women can use many words in day. Besides that, women’s brain have high empathy, they have low ability to combine something, to control emotion, and they will use feeling to feel something before they do it. Similarly, they will do everything carefully, because they do not want to get many risks due to their act. Women also like to cooperate with another women to do something. When they have problem, women will need someone else to share it, because women like to tell their problem as process of their thinking. In the same way, when women want to tell something to someone, usually, they will use figurative words. They do not like to talk directly like men.

The reason why men and women’s brain is different, it is because they have some differences in it. Some differences are spatial difference, verbal difference, and the difference of memory. It is base of the difference which makes men and women will be always different and it can affect them, like how they think about something, they act to do something, or how they can feel something in every condition.

Yusanthiya_Essay (rev 1)

Difference of Men and Women’s Brain

God creates human in the world, they are men and women. Men and women are human, but I think, they have difference. What is different of them is their brain.
The brain of men and women is different. Basically, there are some differences of men and women’s brain, that is, spatial difference, verbal difference, and difference of memory. First, about spatial difference, men’s brain has inclination developing and having spatial which is more complex, it is like mechanical scheme, or like ascertainment of abstract direction. Second, verbal difference, part of cortex of men’s brain is more used to do spatial functions, it will cause inclination to give little portion to part of cortex producing and using the words. So, men usually use 7000 words in day. Third, when talking about the difference of memory, it will talk about how men can memorize something or remember about something. Because hippocampus (central memory) of men is smaller, it will make men cannot remember detailed all things. Generally, men’s brain is systematic, they have high ability to combine everything, to control emotion, to have high orientation in working, they act something at first then they will think for that. They also have response which is aggressive to the risk, and they have inclination to compete with another men. If we look from the way of men gives information when they talk to everyone, they will talk directly and use literal words. In condition, men’s conversation also have inclination to the facts.
On the other hand, women is more different than men, from some difference, first, women’s brain is less to develop, it causes their spatial is not complex, and it impact on their thinking, they are usually difficult to do mechanical scheme, or like ascertainment of abstract direction. Second, if it is looked from verbal difference, women’s brain can balance using spatial functions and give same portion of part of cortex to produce and use the words. So, women can use 20.000 words in day. Third, the difference of memory, hippocampus of women is bigger than men, it causes women can use many words in day. Besides that, women’s brain have high empathy, they have low ability to combine something, to control emotion, and they will use feeling to feel something before they do it. Similarly, they will do everything carefully, because they do not want to get many risks due to their act. Women also like to cooperate with another women to do something. When they have problem, women will need someone else to share it, because women like to tell their problem as process of their thinking. In the same way, when women want to tell something to someone, usually, they will use figurative words. They do not like to talk directly like men.
The reason why men and women’s brain is different, it is because they have some differences in it. Some differences are spatial difference, verbal difference, and the difference of memory. It is base of the difference which makes men and women will be always different and it can affect them, like how they think about something, they act to do something, or how they can feel something in every condition.

Draft Essay – Siti Khoiri Inayah

Draft Essay – Siti Khoiri Inayah
Everyone should be re-arranged to make a better list for their activities. In order to become dicipline..Managing the time is very important for us, especially for children. Many activites their have,sometimes makes their confused, how to manage the time. They often repeatedly ask, How the way to manage a good time? Is it get the good impact? What is the reasons that a children should be allowed their time?
The children needs an attention time to do their activities, especially from their parents. To begin with, manage the time. Although if we as the parent, we can easly manage their time from a little way in order to become independent. Because of independent is very important for ours, in particular for children. To become an independent children , they should be accustomed them selves such as : ( they can wake up in the early by them selves, they can do their activities by them selves, e.t.c.) . All of it without parent. So that, it is one of the first step to become their understood about how the first way to manage their time from that given above.
All of activities will be finish if the children can be manage their time better. Besides an independent, there are some benefits of it such as : ( to make children become dicipline and to make children concsious of their responsibility. As we know that many children who is wastes their time just for something is not important. They can be a success person if they want to arrange their time and many opportunity for get the good future.
Dicipline in chidren’s daily activity is many benefit, such as : ( they can go to school on time, they can do all of their homework on time, they can dicipline in their commune, and they can dicipline in their house and surroundings . Moreover, nothing another human who feels that benefit but rather is children it selves. Whereas the influence about responsibility for children are they can responsible for them selves, they can responsible for their schedule, they can responsible for activities.
That is about manage the time for childen. Many parents should be helping for their childen to manage their time everywhere and anywhere. So that children got into the habit of manage the time. That is how the importance children should be allowed to manage their time.

Siti Khoiri Inayah Review

Siti Khoiri Inayah Review
Title : Genre
An author : Otong Setiawan Djuharie
Pages : 174
Publisher Year : 2007
Publisher : CV. YRAMA WIDYA
Thick : 18 x 25 cm

This book is based Education Unit Level Curriculum (SBC). This book is suitable for use in schools and in this book explores the ins and outs of many genres in various ways, and equipped the examples and exercises in English. Other than that this book presents 700 questions related to the genre. So that you can apply it into your understanding in the form of matter. This is shows that besides being a tool to examine the genre, this book can also be used as a place of contemplationwill measure your mastery of the genre applications.

This book includes a complete category, but this book is not suitable for beginners who want to learn English. because the subject is less understood by the beginner, so could not assist and facilitate their learning process.
Not like a book users who already understand or proficient in English, this book might just be a distraction to read and just solidify skill to jump into the subject of genres and enables them to hone their ability in the presence of the exercises in this book.
Comment : Unfortunately again in this book does not list the author's biography, just the name of the author alone. while people sometimes want to know who the author so they can know him.